Writing Workshop- First Person
This was written for Sandra's Writing Workshop . You can comment on it 'thoughtfully' and constructively, but if you're mean, I reserve the right to kick your comment to the curb! I don't write in first person. Ever. It makes me very uncomfortable. Which is why I put this off till today- the last day to post. But, I decided to do it to try to hone my craft. (Wow, aren't you impressed with my fancy words? hehe) This is a bit of a teaser to my book. It's a scene that is not fully described in the book, but which I had developed as back story. I wrote it in first person only for this workshop. I don't love it. But, here it is anyway. Be kind. Haven and Violet The forest is dark tonight, and silent. I can’t get a single tree to say hello to me. I wish I’d brought Terra, or Bliss. But, I know I have to get it. There’s no way I can do this without it. The entrance to the cave is almost hidden, so I think about the light in my h...